'Would You Turn The Corner?!' Acting Animation Blocking WIP

I've animated a fair amount this summer. Most of it being freelance for a new 2D Platform Game (that's coming to the Android Store, this year! Whoohoo!) But a couple of days ago I decided to start a longer acting piece to help beef up my demo reel for this National Portfolio Day coming up in a few months. I need lots of help on this piece so comments are appreciated. Leave a comment here or on my 11 Second Club thread here: http://www.11secondclub.com/forum/viewtopic.php?id=26313

Sound from AMERICAN GRAFFITI